new to voices

anthonywashington
anthonywashington Member, Voices_Premium
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new to voices

and voice over community would love some feedback on my script.

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  • maryann
    maryann Member, Voices_Premium
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    Anthony...I am reactivitating my premium membership after a 3 year hiatus and there have been some changes. I also don't see any other responses to your request but they may be hidden. I like your voice....deep and solid....but I am hearing a lot of breaths and your delivery sounds like you are reading. I would suggest longer phrases and removing some of the breaths. Also, make your delivery more conversational as if you were explaining your information to a friend or a potential recruit. Good luck.

    Mary Ann Jacobs

  • anthonywashington
    anthonywashington Member, Voices_Premium
    First Comment

    Thank you, Mary Ann, for your response and your honest assessment. it is greatly appreciated. i will definitely take what you said and apply it to my demos. welcome back